Walking Inside a Dream … Till My Death
It’s been some time since I wrote a poem. It was about time I did.
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On those stones I walked alone,
bearing only the name that I’d been given.
I walked until I reached the shore,
of the life that I’ve been living.
Staring into breaking waves
memories of broken days
and all the times that went away.
Reflecting on my life.
On that bridge I walked alone,
staring down at rocks below.
I dreamed at last I was back home,
in the company of those I’ve known.
Hanging on a steel beam
separating life from dream
listening to the running stream.
Reflecting on my life.
On those stones I lay alone,
motionless and without breath.
And now at last I’ve found my home,
Reflecting on my death.
Ish said,
March 10, 2008 at 6:12 pm
Awesome as ever, Darkster…
Anew said,
March 14, 2008 at 7:24 pm
Shakespeare much? xD
Cheer up, Frat Boy
… =]
muXai said,
March 15, 2008 at 9:58 am
awsome as alwayx ^_^
Thuppi said,
March 24, 2008 at 7:12 pm
hi, it’s me. Thuppi, Dhim’s friend. Your poem is awesome.
Someone out there said,
March 27, 2008 at 3:22 pm
Sorry abt the ” Secret Identity “, but I just wud rather stick to an anoymous name than my real one
. Maybe you’ll find out who I am yourself someday but I will rather not display my identity here where everyone can see it. Commenting on your poem … it was gr8 
. Oh wait… AWESOME! Like the way you express it. Real poetic 
.
Dhanish Athif said,
April 1, 2008 at 6:54 pm
Okay.. Thanks =^_^= @Ish
@muXai
@Someone out there
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Thankew
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Heheh. Hi, thanks. @Thuppi
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Oh, Ok then. You COULD’ve thought of something “cooler” than “Someone out there” =P
Thank you. Though I have kinda limited my number of poems due to … lack of ideas
Some one out there said,
April 1, 2008 at 9:10 pm
” Some one out there ” was the first name that came into my mind .. I didn’t want to waste the time thinking of a cool anonymous name
Dhanish Athif said,
April 4, 2008 at 1:21 pm
Aww.. too bad. Well, I’ll be glad to change your “username” from all your previous comments as well if/when you do think of a better name. =^_^= [Yeah, as Admin, I can do that
] @Some one out there